Very original, and angry. I like this piece, simply because it was interesting to read. But you take us through and really make the reader feel what this person is going through. All in all it is very creative and a nice write.
The last line was very powerful, :when he pored them into the first bottle". Very cool, shows how he draws his strength now from memories lost and love once had by drinking it in after he pored them in the bottle. Great imagery. I love it.
This was a very allusive and entrancing piece and I found it quite original in content. I loved how you used scared girl and broken guitar ~ neither could sing. Very well done! Love,Peace,Joy!
This is one angry piece You really captured a lot of emotion in this one I can see the womans face as fear sets in her eyes The imagery is excellent in this write I look forward to reading more of your writes Nice Job God Bless Ron
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron
Submission Name: The Loving Guitar
