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    dots Submission Name: Crazy In-Lovedots
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    Author: Geraldine
    ASL Info:    25
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 241/296/80
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
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       Again, just thinking out loud!


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    dotsCrazy In-Lovedots
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    Why isn't it possible for me to stop loving you?
    You have done more bad tha good.
    So what exactly is it that you do,
    that makes me so crazy in-love with you?

    When you left I didn't think I could go on.
    The world around me disappeared.
    All I had were memories of you to hold on to.
    You were my equilibrium,
    I lost my balance when I lost you.

    Eventually, I moved on.
    I finally had my feet back on the ground.
    I was almost whole again.
    I was seeing things clearly.

    Until you came back,
    my life had meaning.
    Now my only meanning is you.
    You're every thought in my head,
    every breath that I take,
    and every beat of my heart.

    The thoughts of you are suffocating me,
    consuming me.
    All of my goals,
    my plans,
    my aspirations,
    revolve around you.

    What exactly is it that you do,
    that makes me so crazy in-love with you?




    Submitted on 2005-06-06 11:18:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this that a good poem i felt it inside me. i love the crazy-in-love parts. i can feel the emotin pouring out of this, not to be rude but it coulda been a little better but i love it!
    xox reiza
    | Posted on 2005-06-25 00:00:00 | by crazzybeautiful | [ Reply to This ]
      God, will you stop reading my mind? You are like a reflection of myself. Everything I feel, you seem to feel. I am adding this poem to my favorites list. GGGGGGGGGGRRRRRREEEEEEEAAAAATTTTT Job!
    | Posted on 2005-06-06 00:00:00 | by ShatteredGlass | [ Reply to This ]
      wow...i am frickin' speechless...this is such a great artistic work of art...this is tray cool, dude...

    keep up the exceptional work
    -patrice nolastname
    | Posted on 2005-06-06 00:00:00 | by Poetry_Princess | [ Reply to This ]
      wow. I agree with these two. Everytime I fall, I fall hard so that my life ends up in pieces when I am alone again. What is it that makes us so Crazy (in love?)
    | Posted on 2005-06-06 00:00:00 | by St. Agatha | [ Reply to This ]
      damn, this is good work. The fact that someone can "get over" sombody and then have that person walk right back into their life and take control again is down right scary. You did a verry good job on describing how exactly she made you feel after she came back. Nice Random thoughts.
    | Posted on 2005-06-06 00:00:00 | by Di Re Rakord | [ Reply to This ]
      Well done alissa, Well done.
    Great write, although excuse me to point one thing out that you probably haven't noticed yet, you mispelled bad in the first stanza.
    Anyways That means nothing.
    You made me relate to this because I've had this happen to me once, (leaves me and then comes back) and then she left again.
    A sad tale.
    I can't say it was as "frickin' speechless" as these other fellers say, but it was very good.
    You know I'm a fan.
    Big Bill-
    (btw I'm posting a new one soon)
    | Posted on 2005-06-06 00:00:00 | by Big_Bill789 | [ Reply to This ]
      very well done very enjoyable read to be in touch with someones spirit the hurts you is really brave on paper in in day to day life very good thanx for your comment on my schild you should read skeletons as it is the ist part of my child
    thanx again and enjoyable read
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-06-07 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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