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Tick Tock

Author: Aj
ASL Info:    21/M/MI
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Words: 164
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Tick Tock

my body has grown weary.
my mind is tired, and bored.
every relationship rots before my eyes.
time after time, again and again.

i've become caught up in this cycle.
and now i just want out.
it seems i've been misunderstood.
and my decisions create doubt.

this world asks poses questions.
and i don't believe there are any answers.
i've run out of breath on this lonely quest.
my spirit can't be but deterred.

i learned to walk the same as anyone.
though i crawl in this dark closet.
i can't find the door handle .
and i'm afraid i never will.

i may never amount to anything.
but who's to say what nothing is.
do i serve a purpose on this earth.
or am i only wasting air.

these are all questions that anyone can ask.
perhaps i'm just stuck on these thoughts.
i don't think i'll ever give up trying.
as time ticks by, i'm slowly dieing.

Submitted on 2004-04-08 02:27:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I liked this. It was very good. Maybe you can help me out with some of my stuff, too. I could use the help! lol. Anyway... I like the subjects and the feel of your writings. Very good.
| Posted on 2004-04-08 00:00:00 | by Dark Angel | [ Reply to This ]

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