Description: I found out yesterday I will have a son, and words could not express how excited my husband and I are. I really wrote this because it is so unreal to have this love for someone I dont even know have never seen, but it is unlike anything I have ever felt befoure, and I love it...I love him.
in love with a feeling -------------------------------------------
To begin love
With a thought of you
To make this in time
Show
Not even to have seen you
And still so very in love
Making my mind
Swarm with the
Thought of us
Our new family
Our new joy
I'll make your life
More than mine was to me
Letting you know
How important you will
Always be
I'm so in love
With a thought
Of the life
We will share
And I will make it
Become more beautiful
Then ever could have been imagined.
Awww...this was sweet and it reminds me of my younger sister and her five boys. Its funny to see her being a mother and all. I think you did a swell job in showing your emotions for someone who is already a part of you and will be for a long time to come. Good luck and have a good one.
Hey, beautiful title, and a sweet ode to your yet to be born son, don't forget to print it, frame it, and hang it in his room, he'll really appreciate it as the years go by. Very nice indeed, and congratulations!
someday i well prable be able to relate to this. but i am 19 and in no hurry. congrads though. i could almost feel the happy tears you must of cryed. raise your son to stand tall but not proud. to be wise and gental. teach him to be a good man. teach him younge and he well remember in his youth and teach his son as he grow old. much love. -snuff
yeah, that feeling is why so many women cannot give up their babies at birth and why surrogate mothers change their minds! great poem about soon-to-be motherhood which I hope you put in the baby book. excellent write! congratulations too!
what a beautiful gift, a new life! i love that you want to make a beautiful life for this person you have not even met yet. i am constantly amazed at the beauty of a woman carrying a life inside of her, it must be the most incredible feeling ever. i get from this that you will be a most wonderful mother. thank you for this glimpse of your beauty that you will certainly pass on to your son. !Cat
wow, that is amazing! Congrats! im really happy for you.. you did a great job of showing how you do feel, even though your not sure how. i hope that everything goes well, and keep us updated! jennifer
I enjoy the title and concept more than the poem itself- congratulations, though, on the bun- I hope it all works out well for you... Now back to thys concept of being in love (abstract concept) with a feeling (thought of an abstract concept) It boggles my mynd!!! I sit here- before you- boggled! For me thys requires further delving into... And so I am off to explore thys that you have given me to ponder... Peace, love and monkeys with jackhammers- !SiX!
Submission Name: in love with a feeling
