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    dots Submission Name: Alabama Death Rowdots
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    Author: freak_like_me
    ASL Info:    20/female/Ireland
    Elite Ratio:    4.81 - 120/118/49
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 1052
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 697



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       I dont know. I tried to be imaginative and creative here, aw well, i tried. All of u USA people please dont take the last line offensive, its merely to represent unfairness,,,,ok.


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    dotsAlabama Death Rowdots
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    We build our foundations solid
    Preparation is vitality
    Our lives sing and hope for justice
    But the fate is already sung

    We write out letters
    In vain hope of honour
    So we will gain
    Strength from the loved kindreds

    Society is a turnaround
    That venges justice
    Yet we sit here
    Locked away
    Ready for torture

    There is no justice
    In our electric chairs

    There is no second chance
    In our electric chairs

    So we build our foundations solid
    Preparation is vitality
    We wont forget
    Americas lack of morality






    Submitted on 2005-06-07 15:08:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey... i don't care too much for american traditions or morals very much myself..
    | Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]
      Well to be fair, our country isn't. to be free, our country isn't. All in all It was well writen, and have question as to where you came up with the title. Keep up the good work. Will be dropping back in to check out more of your works.

    as always,
    illusions
    | Posted on 2005-06-07 00:00:00 | by illusions35904 | [ Reply to This ]


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