I know I deserve it cause I made the mistak in breaking up even tho I didnt see it but its too late.I really like your poetry cause I can relate.I guess everyone has this once(or twice) and some give up yet some want to but cant out of something pulling them to keep trying.Good work.Peace
A very painful and deeply emotional poem, It is a strong and expressive write and alot of people have probably felt that same way you did a good job of expressing your feelings. I enjoyed reading this one as well.
I LOVED IT! very emotional and it reminded me of my ex boi friend. i wish i wrote the poem myself. lol! did u break the relationship up with him? i hope u feel better. im still healing from what my ex put me threw. great job keep writing.
thanx for your comment on skeletons i dont mean to be ude if someone makes you feel this way find something or someone who doesnt love is not ignorance pain should be shared by 2 not just one i hope this makes sence and does not offend good emotional prayer thanx sandman
very emotional. and i really do hope that it works out. this is venting, but its much better, it shows your emotion, its not just words. You express your feelings and what you cant feel. It drags the reader in, my heart really does ache for you.- great job- jennifer
Interesting read. Very emotional. That one sounds like it came from the heart, unlike my story. :)
I'd like to think I'm a pretty well-balanced and happy person. I'm not depressed, I just write things like that because I see it happening to a lot of people. I can't say I've never hurt anyone, but hey. Life and relationships are all just learning processes for how to handle retirement :P I'm not mad at my parents, I didn't write that piece about myself at all. It was just a rant I needed to scribble down. Nonetheless...thanks for reading my work, I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I enjoyed yours as well.
very emotional its very deep i think everyone goes through something like this. so almost everyone can relate. this is very good keep it up and ill read more. ive read some of your other work to. you are a very talented writer and i hope that everything works out for you...Joy