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    dots Submission Name: Truedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 481
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 336



    Description:
       To my true friends in my life. Thank u!

    Love,Peace,Joy!!


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsTruedots
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    True friendship is like a word
    unpronounced
    Like a sepia ink so brilliant
    colorless
    So unconditional and accepting
    real
    As a diamond uncut
    appreciated
    Is eternally reaching
    protecting
    True friendship is like a pact
    unsaid
    True friendship "IS"




    Submitted on 2005-06-07 18:09:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Muhahahahaha I get to comment first! YEHAW!
    This was well put and well said. Not bad lefty :). My fav line :
    True friendship is like a pact
    unsaid

    Quite nice!

    Muy bien EphinatorballarinaandstufflikethatcuzI'mjustoolazytousethespacebar!

    OK?

    StW :)
    | Posted on 2005-06-07 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]
      I dont really care for the way you set it up, but the meaning behind it is. . well put. . .

    You should put more description into it!
    | Posted on 2005-06-07 00:00:00 | by Blindly-N-Love | [ Reply to This ]
      This one was okay, not your best piece, but it still worked. Maybe it is just becaue I can't really remember the feeling of having a true friend. I'm not sure if I ever had a true friend to be honest with you. Sad, I know, but I guess my sisters fall into that catagory, because I can tell then anything and I know they will always be there for me and support me in any decision I decide to make. Anyway, hope to read more!
    Alissa
    | Posted on 2005-06-08 00:00:00 | by Geraldine | [ Reply to This ]


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