Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Green Thoughtsdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 25
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 944
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 156



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsGreen Thoughtsdots
    -------------------------------------------


    I tried to write,
    but the thoughts were too green.
    Perhaps they'll ripen in a day or two
    into a sweet, juicy poem.





    Submitted on 2004-04-08 09:11:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      ah... keep track of those green thoughts cuddle. don't lose out of any of them - they're much too valuable.
    | Posted on 2004-04-13 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this its simple, but i like it, im not sure if its b/ of the color green which is my favorite color, but anywho, i liek the way you compared it to a frit and having to wait for it to ripen, good write
    | Posted on 2004-04-08 00:00:00 | by gigglygirl | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this. It gave me a great picture in my mind....Little green tomatoes...just waiting for them to ripen so they can be picked and savored and shared.....
    | Posted on 2004-04-08 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ]
      I too think this poem was short and cute, well thought out and only the beginning if something better. good write...
    ~Jaime Lee Pachétte~
    | Posted on 2004-04-08 00:00:00 | by darkened_soul | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    6191

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    To Glow written by krs3332003
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    Push written by JanePlane
    Summer written by layDsayD
    To written by SavedDragon
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    untitled written by Chelebel
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    Deaf Dumb and Blind is no excuse written by poetotoe
    Skin of Fables written by ShadowParadox
    It's been a while written by Sharati_hottie
    Giving written by jjd
    Song written by Daniel Barlow
    The Promise written by annie0888
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry