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    dots Submission Name: The Hangman's Notedots
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    Author: gavinspikenard
    ASL Info:    20-something/m/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 273/334/104
    Words: 419
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsThe Hangman's Notedots
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    Y O U R - D O U B T - I S - L I K E - A - N O O S E
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    - A R O U N D - M Y - N E C K
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    ... F R I E N D S - D O N T - L E T - F R I E N D S
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    - G R O W - L O N E S O M E - I N
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    - D E P R E S S I O N
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    ... I - W O U L D - L O V E - T O - S A Y
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    T H A T - Y O U - K E P T - M E - S A N E
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    ... B U T - I N S T E A D - Y O U - T O O K - M Y
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    - B R E A T H - A W A Y
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    Submitted on 2005-06-08 01:37:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hey man whats up are you okay?
    i'll be your friend?
    look if things get rough just try to surround you self with positive peopletyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuufc
    | Posted on 2005-06-08 00:00:00 | by kristian | [ Reply to This ]
      ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...Ha ha, thanks for caring, but this is not a piece about me... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
    | Posted on 2005-06-08 00:00:00 | by gavinspikenard | [ Reply to This ]
      Something strange about this poem...haven't quite figured it out yet...hmm...well, I guess I'll have to ponder a bit more...

    Desser
    | Posted on 2005-06-08 00:00:00 | by Desser | [ Reply to This ]
      This was really different but it's good. u used your imagine very well in this piece i never saw something like this on htis website. well i don't know what else to say besies hope to hear from you and keep up hte good work.
    | Posted on 2005-06-08 00:00:00 | by seven11 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmmm, very interesting. I really liked it. I wasn't too keen on the way you typed it out, that was sort of strange, but the words were very strong! You got your point across with very little explanation and I thought that was pretty cool. Keep up the writes, can't wait to read more!
    Alissa
    | Posted on 2005-06-08 00:00:00 | by Geraldine | [ Reply to This ]



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