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    dots Submission Name: Mom I went to a party...dots

    Author: Poetry_Princess
    ASL Info:    16/no thanks/garage floor
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 24/26/12
    Words: 303
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
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       i got this from my best friend, jasmine, who can't be among us now. but don't worry, i'll be with her soon. until then, enjoy this poetic work of art...

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    dotsMom I went to a party...dots

    mom i went to party
    and remembered what you said
    you said for me not to drink
    so i had a sprite instead

    the boys were all drunk, laughing
    with cups of beer filling to the brim
    the guy who took me to the party, jake, was drunk
    so i decided not to leave with him

    i got a ride with anthony just as jake was about to leave
    i was pretty scared when i thought about him
    we got into separate cars and went our separate ways
    and i never saw him again

    me and anthony took the long route
    you know, the one that crosses the park
    next thing i know there's this really bright light
    and then everything goes dark

    i open my eyes and see EMTs
    i see blood everywhere and wonder why
    one guy said to the other
    "it's no use, this girl's going to die"

    this all happened so quick
    i'm starting to feel my heartrate slow
    i will miss you and daddy
    i just want you to know

    i tried to be a good girl
    but i guess it's just fate
    they put the boy that hit us in a bodybag
    and i saw that it was jake's

    they zip up another body and lay it next to me
    i start to cry, knowing that the impossible is true
    not only is it jake,
    but anthony's dead too

    i'm really scared, mom
    i'm trying to be brave
    and if i really die,
    i want 'daddy's girl' on my grave

    i guess that this is it
    but i just didn't want to die
    i just wanna say these last words to my mother
    i love you and goodbye
    (written on june 2, 2005.)
    -patrice a.

    Submitted on 2005-06-08 12:10:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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