Hee hee hee, oh this is funny....And yes, what a way to get around censorship!
Enjoyed this greatly, I really did...the only thing I could 'suggest' would be to tighten up the 'verb ending in 'ed'' things....maybe just have them as 'verb, past tense' or 'verb, 'ed'....it sounds nicer that way...not as stretched out......
But then thats only my opinion
Other than than, I <verb, past tense> it was <adjective> and very entertaining!
wow, a form letter to an ass-hole, cheater, liar, no good, you get my drift! excellent! I will have to copy this one. actually I need about a hundred or so copies. very original and to expand it you could start an online service to send them out for people! nice job!
This is pretty clever. Mad Libs and Choose Your Own Adventure books were some of the best things of childhood. I don't know about expanding it unless you do a series. I don't know if this would work longer. A Mad Libs children's story that comes out wildly inappropriately would be cute. I think a cheesy love note/ poem would work too.
Ah, Haha! Quite cleaver indeed! What an imigination to have to get an idea to do something such as that! Fantastic and comical. Your peice that was previously pointed out makes me think of all kinds of open ended chaoses and chaotic scenerios. How nice it is indeed to allow me to chose where your writing goes. Keep free and chaotic, RMDIII.
this is so great! gave me a great start to a thursday morning* i use to do these all the time when i was younger. they were the best. i have to say this is good just the way it is, i wouldn't expand unless you do a whole new one. with that said, congrats on this and have a great day!
Cj u just made my afternoon with a great mid-day laugh! This was a unique and brilliant idea ~ u may have just found a way 2 get more people 2 read poetry! <@> 2 used 2 love those crazy mad libs ~ my brothers & I got a kick out of sneaking bad words in there. This was awesome friend! Love,Peace,Joy! epiph the <noun>