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    dots Submission Name: Mad Lib Lifedots
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    Author: Stwcjj
    ASL Info:    27/m/ny
    Elite Ratio:    5.69 - 327/149/13
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Misc/Comedy
    Total Views: 1074
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    Bytes: 620



    Description:
       This is a short little post that exists, like me, soley for your amusement......I'm pondering expanding on this topic, so your feedback would be greatly appreciated!

    and stuff


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    dotsMad Lib Lifedots
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    Dear <proper noun>,

    I hope you die! You are such an <body part>!

    I thought you loved me! Then I caught you <verb ending in “ing”> my best friend, <proper noun>!

    You stupid sack of <noun>!

    Oh, and your PRICELESS cd collection? I <verb ending in "ed"> it to pieces with my <noun>!

    And if you ever come around here my friend <name, male> is going to <verb> your <verb ending in “ing”> off!

    Hope you rot in hell,
    <Proper Noun>




    Submitted on 2005-06-08 15:46:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      lol. Very amusing & unique. It was great that the reader could chose the word of their choice & get involved a bit. I don't think I've ever come across a piece such as this. Wonderfully twisted:)
    | Posted on 2005-11-05 00:00:00 | by Tonya V. | [ Reply to This ]
      HA!

    this is really cute, and very clever! nice light little read, althought i wonder, do people actually leave these letters?? hmmm

    *shrug*

    anyway, i was amused, and it seems that was soley the purpose! :P

    -Nikki
    | Posted on 2005-11-03 00:00:00 | by stolie77 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hee hee hee, oh this is funny....And yes, what a way to get around censorship!

    Enjoyed this greatly, I really did...the only thing I could 'suggest' would be to tighten up the 'verb ending in 'ed'' things....maybe just have them as 'verb, past tense' or 'verb, 'ed'....it sounds nicer that way...not as stretched out......

    But then thats only my opinion

    Other than than, I <verb, past tense> it was <adjective> and very entertaining!

    Great job, glad I read this...

    <Proper Noun>
    | Posted on 2005-06-27 00:00:00 | by Katia | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, a form letter to an ass-hole, cheater, liar, no good, you get my drift! excellent! I will have to copy this one. actually I need about a hundred or so copies. very original and to expand it you could start an online service to send them out for people! nice job!
    | Posted on 2005-08-14 00:00:00 | by sierramuse8 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey, Cj, cool idea!
    You could actually put out a whole series of these to cover various situations.
    I don't know about expanding it too much, maybe the joke would wear thin fast? I dunno...

    But this was great, I <superlative adjective> it!

    Be Happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-06-08 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      Haha, this is sooo funny! Very original! I wouldn't mind reading a couple more like these.
    Gave me a good laugh, thanks for that.
    | Posted on 2005-06-08 00:00:00 | by DisilusndDreamr | [ Reply to This ]
      funny funny stuff. although you might want to consider changing the format a bit, so it seems like more of a mad lib type thing. keep up the good work

    rain
    | Posted on 2005-06-08 00:00:00 | by Rain | [ Reply to This ]
      This is pretty clever. Mad Libs and Choose Your Own Adventure books were some of the best things of childhood. I don't know about expanding it unless you do a series. I don't know if this would work longer. A Mad Libs children's story that comes out wildly inappropriately would be cute. I think a cheesy love note/ poem would work too.
    | Posted on 2005-06-08 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah, Haha! Quite cleaver indeed! What an imigination to have to get an idea to do something such as that!
    Fantastic and comical.
    Your peice that was previously pointed out makes me think of all kinds of open ended chaoses and chaotic scenerios.
    How nice it is indeed to allow me to chose where your writing goes.
    Keep free and chaotic,
    RMDIII.
    | Posted on 2005-06-09 00:00:00 | by Ratiomeducet | [ Reply to This ]
      Very enjoyable, I used to love Mad Libs. (Truthfully, I still do, just can't find them anymore!!!)

    Using them actually taught me the difference between things like adjectives, pronouns, adverbs, etc. I think you should keep this one the way it is, but give us more! More I say!

    (Suggestion, write one about a last will and testament.....)

    -Chell-
    P.S. What a way to get around censorship!!!! Still chuckling
    | Posted on 2005-06-09 00:00:00 | by Chell | [ Reply to This ]
      this is so great! gave me a great start to a thursday morning* i use to do these all the time when i was younger. they were the best. i have to say this is good just the way it is, i wouldn't expand unless you do a whole new one. with that said, congrats on this and have a great day!

    jennifer
    | Posted on 2005-06-09 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ]
      Cj u just made my afternoon with a great mid-day laugh! This was a unique and brilliant idea ~ u may have just found a way 2 get more people 2 read poetry!
    <@> 2 used 2 love those crazy mad libs ~ my brothers & I got a kick out of sneaking bad words in there.
    This was awesome friend! Love,Peace,Joy! epiph the <noun>
    | Posted on 2005-06-09 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      hahahaha...
    your a nut ! i love madlibs. my husband and i had big fun when we were traveling the country doing dirty madlibs.

    Maybe later i'll send you this with my nouns/verbs added. :P

    CC
    | Posted on 2005-06-10 00:00:00 | by C. Starr | [ Reply to This ]


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