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    dots Submission Name: in the fleshdots
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    Author: sickly
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 545/537/203
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
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    ozzy osbourne is finished
    david bowie move over
    the king is here

    no side effects
    i've got class
    i'm the one

    take it
    or leave it
    but you love it

    the badness
    the madness
    the sadness

    smarter
    faster
    damned

    leave the deal mamaking to me
    haunting and pretty
    through the night and in deep




    Submitted on 2005-06-08 21:40:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      dood. is this about lemmy from motorhead? cause lemmy from motorhead just about the only dood in the world who could talk [censored] about ozzy 'effin osbourne and back it up. i hope this is about lenny, from motorhead.
    | Posted on 2005-06-08 00:00:00 | by murf | [ Reply to This ]


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