*sigh* this makes me think of Nan.. i love the "visual touch" because i know it well. that is all it takes sometimes, for her to look at me with that deep longing and love that feeds my heart and soul. you know... thanks for reminding me because i have a righteous case of the blues right now.. all i need is to think about her and our visit and i am filled with that serenity. thank you for sharing this gem. !Cat
Haha. I was taken somewhat aback (is that that a word? lol oh well I've made a new one, if it isn't....) at the opening line: "You look hot."
How profound, lol. Sometimes honesty is the best policy, and you understand that!
"When you wear your heart as glasses I see much clearer. I find focus in my day. I envision God. It seems she sees you as I do. She told me to say, that you look good today."
For me, the poem didn't get good until this last stanza. Something about it, I just really like! I picture someone all lovey dovey in love wearing heart shaped, rose tinted glasses saying...ehhh you look good today....all dreamy like. Nice! I haven't come across a stanza I've liked this much in a while...so good job. (Sometimes I have odd taste, no?) Peace.