I don't like to critique things that are heartfelt. That being said, I think the sentiment is sweet; albeit a bit overdone but there's nothing that hasn't been done. The feeling is one that many of us can relate to and your anguish is clearly labeled. While not particularly heavy on imagery, the message is simple and easily understood. The rhyme is somewhat forced and as an author you're forcing metre which seems restrictive to the spirit of your message. And lastly.... punctuation. It will assist in the conveyance of your piece's flow. Use your commas and semi-colons; avoid the "..." in the last stanza as it awkwardly breaks the deliberate flow of your piece.
this is a great poem you need to keep this up heartache is one of the insperations for this piece of work for i can tell all of are going to be heartbroken so good way to tell the world your view of it keep it up