I thought this was a very good poem, a tribute to someone dear to you. Death is so hard to deal with, I have lost too many who were very close to me and it never gets any easier, always missing them, but the memories always last! My sympathies to you! Take care!
I think that this was a very good poem, and a hard one to capture completly. I understand where you're coming from, and that makes the poem so much better. I really really like it. The only thing I didn't like was the rythm seemed to be a wee bit off, or maybe I'm a little off, or well. :D Cheers, ~Sephe~
This doesn't suck at all! I'm sure ur gram would have loved it! Death is a crazy thing that brings all kinds of emotions and I think u captured them well. Again, very good...take care and hang in there! :)
Wow, you've been busy, huh? This is a good poem, and its lovely that its dedicated to your grandmum. I, unfortunately, don't have a close relationship with my grandmoms or great grandmothers (my greta-grandmothers died when I was young) But its good that at least you got close to her. I hope all is well! ~Kat
This was also another good poem of yours. not sure who its about though, but I have a fairly good guess. Baby, you know I'm here for you if you ever want or need to talk about anything, no matter what it is, even if I can't help, I'll still be here for you and listen to you. Oh, I feel dumb...It s about your grandmother, which is what I guessed, but I could have just read the description. Anyways, I like this poem so mmuch. That's very special to have a relationship like that with someone, not everybody gets that gift. I hope I talk to you soon. Bye baby... SAM