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    dots Submission Name: Haligh, Lovedots
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    Author: Samson McLuchin
    ASL Info:    17/m
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 17/19/9
    Words: 455
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 283
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    Bytes: 2691



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       Okay...this is actually lyrics for a song (so please excuse any needless repetition or infantile rhymes that seem stupid without music) but I have always been more intrigued by lyrics that are poetical and maybe more philosophical than your average song. These lyrics, however, I feel lack some of the character that some of my other works have. This is basically because I have found it particalarly difficault to separate myself from my emotions when writing this as it is maybe the most raw thing I have written about, without wanting to get into details. I should maybe highlight the word haligh - which is not actually a word - since I first came across it in Bright Eyes' song "Haligh, Haligh, A Lie, Haligh" and not knowing what it meant really bugged me. It is basically a pretty much redundant exclamation similar to 'Alas' or - in more modern terms - 'shit'. Its origins maybe from Hebrew - mre probably Yiddish - but I have heard an interesting theory that it comes from South Africa and relates to a festival which commemorates infidelity towards men (weird). Haligh was also Old English for 'holy' and may be related to the word 'Hallelujah'. In this case, just take it as an expression of resignation and defeat.


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    dotsHaligh, Lovedots
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    tell me what you want to know.
    I have just one question:
    did I go too slow?
    you mock the hours; chastise the cowards
    who always end up all alone.
    common sense is my pretence, the ignorance of love.
    a never-knowing confidence, the spineless twist of blood.
    yeah, this stone heart you’ve torn apart sinks to the soil and silt;
    coincidence incensed the part of me that feels no guilt.
    and I loved you, maybe I always will…
    and then there’s nothing I can do to rid me off you.
    a brief romance, taking a chance to throw coins down the well.
    if you wanted more – right on the floor! – then you would never tell.
    What was I supposed to think when screaming clocks just blink?
    telling the time from this warped watch: a nod and a wink.
    complete the move, complete the square, complete this final dare.
    Ivory tusks can never rust. the useless thrust of lust
    you see before you pouring out of every single pore.
    sip it up in a cup and tell me you need more.
    was it a test and am I then blessed?
    if it was I’m sure I failed.
    perfect harmony to coalesce now all my charms have paled.
    sing hallelujah, sing haligh, sing for nothing, sing to the skies.
    sing hallelujah to the kings; this court is never full.
    he who dares…he always wins and that’s why I’m the fool.
    I hope you get your dreams, I hope you see most marvellous scenes.
    even though they’re not for me, see you on silver screens.
    so there you are: you’ve made it big and everyone loves you.
    I really, truly hope you’re happy. oh, honestly I do.
    that’s not to say that I don’t hope you rot from every choice you made.
    but for now I’ll take me seat and watch this ego parade.
    staring up at you on stage, perform an act for me.
    you always were a good actress, weren’t you?
    I knew that everyone else would see.
    cursed with green envy. haligh, the white lights of the stage come down
    and light up you. you lit up me but now you’re gone and I can’t see.
    sing hallelujah, sing haligh, sing for nothing, sing to the skies.
    haligh, haligh, my love. haligh, haligh.
    haligh is not enough to conquer winter skies.
    haligh, haligh, my love. haligh, haligh…
    haligh is not enough to save us when we die.
    haligh is not enough to cure us when we cry.
    haligh is not enough to break free from the sky.
    haligh is not enough. you think it is? do I?
    haligh is never enough. haligh, haligh, haligh…
    haligh is not enough to conquer winter skies.




    Submitted on 2005-06-09 12:14:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was a pretty good, though I didn't really think the ending was that great. I loved the overall flow and could see this going as a song, Great job and hope you write more soon.
    | Posted on 2005-06-09 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]



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