Wow. I like this. If you don't mind I'm going to show this to my best friend. I love having a friend like this. I think everyone needs a friend to be there no matter what. This is a great write. I hope the friend you wrote this for apreciates it.
Hey Jennifer, I liked this a lot :) When I saw you defining Sponge Mop, I first read it as SpongeBob and had to reread it :P <never new spongebob was used in that manner!> But great heartfelt poem, with a nice rhymin' scheme! :)
awww i want a soul friend now. This is really sweet! I wouldn't change a thing and it's going on my faves if I remember to press the link when I finish here. awesome write, couldn't have put it together better myself.
I really like the loyalty and sentiment in this although it feels rather sad...as though this "soul friend" is using you and that you are not getting the same support and devotion in return...just the sense of someone who is very self-absorbed and unaware of the affect they have on you (or maybe I'm reading between the lines and am way off base)