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    dots Submission Name: Mandatory Spiritdots
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    Author: Katj
    ASL Info:    17/F/IL
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 103/89/24
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Bytes: 303



    Description:
       This is what I think of public schools.


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    dotsMandatory Spiritdots
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    Mandatory spirit
    Is forced upon me
    Everyday.
    Following your hallway propaganda.
    Sitting in wooden cages-
    Thirty to a cell,
    Waiting for our daily release.
    Sweet salvation……
    But its short-lived
    For we always return for more tomorrow.




    Submitted on 2005-06-09 20:30:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very cool poem. I like the size of it too. It gets to the point. School sucks ass, you wish you weren't there, but you have to do it anyway, against your will.
    | Posted on 2005-06-10 00:00:00 | by Ratmeat | [ Reply to This ]


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