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    dots Submission Name: Lips To Melt Fordots
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    Author: Amberdy
    ASL Info:    21/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    4.37 - 240/232/59
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 225
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    Description:
        Just a little description of last night....It goes hand in hand with my latest journal entry.
    Yes I am sure that many of you will think it sounds "childish", "Immature" or "cliché" but I really don't care.....I just wrote it because I can, and that's all there is to it. It's just one of those things that has you feeling all giddy and you gotta put it on paper....heh...anyway, let me know what you think


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    dotsLips To Melt Fordots
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    Parked on the beach
    on the blackest of nights,
    all but an occasional glance
    of random headlights.
    Layed out on the hood
    of your "p.o.s" car,
    as we stared in silence
    at every flickering star.
    The waves kept rolling,
    the wind tangled my hair,
    But somehow I let go
    Of every single care.
    We walked hand in hand
    along the waves on the shore,
    and stumbled upon a sand castle
    left over from before.
    You got caught in the puddle
    so I pulled you away...closer to me,
    And I placed my lips on yours
    ...It just came so naturally.
    And Oh, they were sooo soft...
    the best I've ever felt,
    And it was at that very moment
    You almost made me melt.




    Submitted on 2005-06-10 02:17:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ahum, Welly well well, Another love poem. And
    All and All i say that this definately portrays strong emotional situation. In my own (Neandering) opinions i dont see this as much of a cliché.
    And if you ask me (,which you didnt), I think love is mainly childish and immature. So worry not for what you have wrought is a journey all have sought to establish their own person permenance upon this universal coil.
    May your god be with you through all your individual endeavours.
    Ratio M. D. III
    | Posted on 2005-06-10 00:00:00 | by Ratiomeducet | [ Reply to This ]


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