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    dots Submission Name: Lust is such a Bitchdots
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    Author: _winky_
    ASL Info:    25/f/minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 664/529/96
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Fuck it all
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    dotsLust is such a Bitchdots
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    I sit here today
    Shaking my head in shame
    I fucked it all up
    Like all the times before
    Let him turn and go out that door
    Told him no lies
    He cried with every word I spoke
    I couldn’t help it anymore
    I had to just come clean
    I never expected him to stay
    With all that I did he was bound to go
    More times than I can count
    Unfaithful to him, I was so wrong
    I couldn’t help it though
    Lust is such a bitch!
    Consumed me too much to the point
    I gave in as often as I could
    Why I did it?
    Shit, I don’t know
    The thrill of getting busted
    Knowing it would all end if I did
    I just couldn’t stop.
    An addiction some say
    I agree with that one.
    You do it so much,
    You forget who you are with




    Submitted on 2005-06-10 13:23:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I feel for your poem, the faulty design of setting yourself up for failure or giving in to desires/addiction. you seem to know the cards yet intended to play them out exactly as you got/made them, I feel that too, almost as if we are puppets in some sick play, for we cant see the puppeteer but whats even worse is when we find that there were no strings at all and our fate was our own making. who is really controlling who? good job, mike :)
    | Posted on 2005-06-10 00:00:00 | by inspirit999 | [ Reply to This ]
      Own your actions you lusty lol! Actually I sympathise with you. It would be wise to work out why you seek that excitement and get it from somewhere else. Im sorry your relatioship has broken down. Break the pattern so next time it doesnt :)

    You cause your own fate...look for the first action that causes this one.

    Kate

    PS greazt poem
    | Posted on 2005-06-11 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]
      succumbed by sin :P...I understand where you are coming from on this...sometimes you just need that attention and then lose control...<shrug> I guess that's why they say monogamy isn't the natural state of humanity. This is a very "primal" instinct as they say, and with the adultry rate at something like 55% or more, you're not the only one. This was quite bold posting this though, and I admire you for you courage in doing so!

    Thanks for sharing

    Stw
    | Posted on 2005-06-11 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]


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