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    dots Submission Name: You've said it alldots
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    Author: Racing_Chick
    ASL Info:    20/Female/IL
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 79/94/36
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsYou've said it alldots
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    You’ve said it all before,
    Her ears paused on the sweet crackle in your voice the first time you said I love you
    Her eyes caught the glances you sent that no one was suppose to notice
    Her hand held yours, passing back and forth over your fingers
    Her legs walked over to your bed resting for the night
    Her arms wrapped around you making all her worries vanish
    Her palms sweat when you leaned in to kiss her
    Her lips felt the soft and gentle touch of yours, a kiss that could last forever
    You’ve said it all before,
    To her,
    To me,
    You’ve said it all before.




    Submitted on 2005-06-10 13:23:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      sounds like you no more than they thought you did infidelity alwaz seems to bite one way or another good read and good write
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-06-10 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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