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    dots Submission Name: Losing the Searchdots
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    Author: _winky_
    ASL Info:    25/f/minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 664/529/96
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
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    dotsLosing the Searchdots
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    All over the world
    There is only one you
    I look all my life
    But fail in all I do
    Trying to compare
    Everyone I meet
    But they canít hold
    A candle next to you
    I suppose I could give up
    Walk away from true love
    But Iíd sit here in misery
    Hating myself for it
    So I continue my search
    I know Iíll find you again
    I lost you too many times
    To give up now
    All I can see is you
    Yet you are never
    Within in my reach




    Submitted on 2005-06-10 13:25:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really enjoyed this one. You really captured the feeling of being in love and lost. This is one of the hardest emotions to live with in my opinion. The poem had a good message though, in the ways of not giving up though you're searching for what you feel you'll never find. Very good.

    dreamweaver
    | Posted on 2005-06-10 00:00:00 | by dreamweaver | [ Reply to This ]
      Ok, this is in interesting poem, but it's got me a bit confused when I read it :) There are parts of this poem that imply this is about only one person, but for the most part, the way I read it as looking for an ideal person. That this isn't necissarily about THE ONE who got away, but about finding your true love <shrug>
    I could be way off base, wouldn't be the first time :)

    Nice job

    STw
    | Posted on 2005-06-12 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]
      This is good ...I can definatly relate to it ...I dont have any bad words to say about it ...Love sucks ...Romance ....sucks ...*lol* ...It's ironic ...you find someone you absolutly love with all your heart...and then for some reason it gets ripped from you ....Some people say its so you can appreciate it more ....I dont know ...I hope you find him again :) xoxox
    | Posted on 2005-06-14 00:00:00 | by Krysti | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this a lot. i think when you find that special one and let them get away you never stop looking for them. good work lia
    | Posted on 2005-06-14 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]
      this is really good. it shows alot of emotion that alot of people feel.
    how you look all over.. try person after person.. not finding something that last..
    wanting to give up..
    knowing that you much keep going.

    a subject that actually i dont see that much. its either about finding love or loosing.. but you wrote on the search ;)
    very nicely written.
    keep it up!
    jennifer
    | Posted on 2005-06-20 00:00:00 | by joy7542 | [ Reply to This ]


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