When Love Calls by elephantasia

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Submission Name: When Love Calls dots

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Author:	elephantasia
ASL Info:	34/F/UK
Elite Ratio:	3.61 - 392/462/140
Words:	165

Class/Type:	Lyrics/Love
Total Views:	325
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	1169

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When Love Calls dots

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He turns
Time stops
In a breathless moment,
Eyes lock
In a fantasy
Of what could be.

She turns
Her smile
Speaks softly of hunger,
Hearts beat
And murmur of the mystery
And of what could be.

Chorus
When love calls,
No amount of running
Can save you
When love calls
No amount of running
Can save you.

Time turns
Hearts lock
Lips speak of future
Hands hold
Wear rings of intimacy
For what can be.

Chorus
When love calls,
No amount of running
Can save you
When love calls
No amount of running
Can save you.

Bridge
All in a breathless moment
In the blink of a mirrored eye
Two lonely people become one.

Chorus
When love calls,
No amount of running
Can save you
When love calls
No amount of running
Can save you.
When love calls
Are you gonna come running
When love calls
Are you gonna run…

Submitted on 2005-06-10 14:57:14 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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i love this song, it makes me wanna hold on to my girl and hope she doesnt want to run from me. The one thing that i have learned is there is always that breathless moment that never seems to end and you feel like you are one with the person you are with, ah i love that feling it is the only time i ever really feel whole, but i always seem to get thrown away.

Those last lines are one in a million. are you gonna run, what i want to know is it to love or away from it, you left it open for the reader and i dont know if it is on purpose or what, but that is the best way to end any write. it lets the reader use there own imagination to finish it out.
That feeling of time stopping. amd the never ending feeling between there own veiws of each other. It does seem like a fantasy, well in your own mind.
one last thing i like how you put it in booth the mans and womans point of veiw.

Lovin it keep up the great work

ACE
| Posted on 2005-06-11 00:00:00 | by Ace | [ Reply to This ]

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