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    dots Submission Name: Have You Ever Met:dots
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    Author: suzanne
    ASL Info:    41
    Elite Ratio:    2.7 - 47/59/25
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 811
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    Bytes: 680



    Description:
       ok this my first attempt at rhyming it stinks huh be honest i should go back to stories.


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    dotsHave You Ever Met:dots
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    Have you ever met
    a man so true.
    That loves you for
    being you.

    Have you ever met
    the man who loves
    you through and through.
    And he never seems to be blue.

    Well yes I have and
    that man is you.

    You've taken all my dreams
    and made them all come true.
    I just want to say I love you.

    Have you ever met a man
    to wipe away all your fears and tears.
    Have you ever met a man to keep
    you safe year after year.

    Yes I have met that man.
    And that man is you.
    The man who will love you and only you.




    Submitted on 2005-06-10 15:25:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was weet, i liked it i think you are looking for love, if u havent yet. ive been looking a while too! but then again im only 15. but you will find him, ifu havent already.
    Peace out,
    Sunny
    -suicidalchild51-
    | Posted on 2005-06-10 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]
      This was really well written, I loved how it all Rhymed but didn't sound childish, I thought it was a really sweet poem and hope that you keep on writing.
    | Posted on 2005-06-10 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]


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