I am hollow and I am a voyeur
I watch from the top floor
Their image and self, sanity and health
I want to hunt at night
Sleep by day
The shallow and glossy are all my prey
I will eat Hollywood
And their insincerity will drip from my lips
Oh great! A celebrity eating vampire. lol! I get the impression youre not a big fan of the media made magnificants of this world. I enjoyed the way you put it!
That's excellent Django. Im really laughing- And I'm pretty trashed right now Great visuals in this one Very serial killerish. Anyhow, good write man Big Bill- :)
I can see it, clearly and yet i still wonder what the subject is exactly. I also read scars, and if i can be bold but i feel like you aredescribing me at different times of my life. Are these about a women in your life? Either way it's honest to the point but your word usage keeps it intresting, entertaining and thought proving all at the same time, overall i enjoy what i have read so far very much. Nicolette
I am not to sure which angle you are trin to capture. Either you want to 'eat' celebrates, which I would prefer, but I'd eat the fresh ones, clint eastwood would seem way to dry. Or you are way to obsessed with the hole I'm not comfortable with myself and I want to become a clebraty by eating them, or drinking them. jk I get it. I liked the whole vampire twist with it. I would have prefered more detail with the actual feeding part, but it was good. I just like pulling peoples legs to get them thinking. But this was cool, keep it up. The word choose was awsome and I thought it was pretty darn cool. Kacey
Submission Name: Insincere
