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    dots Submission Name: something incomparabledots
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    Author: andnow
    ASL Info:    19.f.wa
    Elite Ratio:    3.57 - 136/135/42
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 591
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotssomething incomparabledots
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    this is a feeling, a feeling, a feeling.
    something incomparable.
    you'd like to pin it down,
    but it defies definition.
    you're not alone
    in your mindset this way.

    this is insight, insight, insight.
    something artistic.
    life is more simple,
    when you appreciate those things often unseen.
    don't you know that the world
    is so much more interesting from this angle.




    Submitted on 2005-06-10 17:12:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It is a really good poem. the repetitions at the beginning sort of obstruct the flow, but overall it was good. Short poems with lots of feeling in them like this one are my favorite type, so yay!
    | Posted on 2005-06-10 00:00:00 | by blind.who.sees | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, this was really good
    It showed emotion, and the triple word thing is pretty cool
    Although It wasn't "Awesome!"
    I will say I really liked it
    Good Job-
    Big Bill
    | Posted on 2005-06-12 00:00:00 | by Big_Bill789 | [ Reply to This ]


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