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Take Me Again


Author: thesacredone
ASL Info:    18/F/BK
Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 139 /159 /50
Words: 95
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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Take Me Again



To touch a thousand miles in you.
Because I know where it's been.
You, oh that soul, you.
Sending chills down my spine with every "Oh baby."
The things you say that melt me into a nothing so deep.
Deep... down into a pit of darkness that I worship just to see the edges of you.
I wish so desperately to go back... One more time...
Just to finally taste you in your purest form.
So again I say, "Take me," in hopes that you'll abide....




Submitted on 2005-06-10 23:32:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I think that this peice has allot of potential. I don't get "You, oh that soul, you." it just doesnt seem to flow. but I did like the part "down into a pit of darkness that I worship just to see the edges of you.
I wish so desperately to go back... One more time... "
| Posted on 2005-06-11 00:00:00 | by hidden lady | [ Reply to This ]


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