Take Me Again

Author: thesacredone ASL Info:    18/F/BK Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 139 /159 /50 Words: 95

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Take Me Again

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To touch a thousand miles in you. Because I know where it's been. You, oh that soul, you. Sending chills down my spine with every "Oh baby." The things you say that melt me into a nothing so deep. Deep... down into a pit of darkness that I worship just to see the edges of you. I wish so desperately to go back... One more time... Just to finally taste you in your purest form. So again I say, "Take me," in hopes that you'll abide....

Submitted on 2005-06-10 23:32:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I think that this peice has allot of potential. I don't get "You, oh that soul, you." it just doesnt seem to flow. but I did like the part "down into a pit of darkness that I worship just to see the edges of you. I wish so desperately to go back... One more time... "

| Posted on 2005-06-11 00:00:00 | by hidden lady | [ Reply to This ]

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