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Submission Name: Flowers in the Attic dots

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Author:	ConScribe
ASL Info:	19/M/Tucson,AZ
Elite Ratio:	5.11 - 262/360/143
Words:	95

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	251
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	675

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Flowers in the Attic dots

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Flowers in the attic,
may only grow dust in time,
be coated with age,
and turn grey with grime.

Flowers in the attic,
Forgotten for so long,
Amidst the endless clutter
Where they don't belong.

Flowers in the attic,
Are forever locked away,
With the fading memories,
Also turning grey.

Flowers in the attic,
Hidden from my view,
I'm locking up the visions,
Of when I still held you.

Flowers in the attic,
Perhaps will never die,
Even though you're packed away
My heart will always cry.

Submitted on 2005-06-11 21:18:38 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This was a really great poem, I loved the images I got of real flowers locked away and forgotten by someone... Anyways, this is one of the better things I've read on this site
| Posted on 2005-06-12 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]
  Awww.You got me .I am a sucker when it comes to love poems or sad poems.The parts that Iliked about the poem is :

Flowers in the attic,
Forgotten for so long,
Amidst the endless clutter
Where they don't belong

I liked this stanza because we only tend to remember the beauty and the meaning of the flower when it is fresh and flawless and when it starts to wilt or die we throw it away or put it in a scrapbook so when we get old and crustywe can look back on the flower.But when you said:

Flowers in the attic,
Perhaps will never die,
Even though you're packed away
My heart will always cry. ,

Now I understand the meaning of your flower.It(a person) was once fresh and flawless and was full of life .But when it died it was left in the dreadful and cold attic.Its that attic that collects dust and stores either junk or painfull memories of a loved one.I thought this poem was really sweet.But if my whole view on it is wrong then just tell me.
| Posted on 2005-06-13 00:00:00 | by shombray | [ Reply to This ]
  this poem reminds me of a book by V.C. Andrews titled "Flowers in the Attic", its a good book. I've read the entire series and it makes me cry. This is a good poem and i like it. Good work.
| Posted on 2005-06-16 00:00:00 | by fiery_eyes | [ Reply to This ]

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