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    dots Submission Name: Chicken & Ribsdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 613
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    Bytes: 313



    Description:
       A silly lunch poem...Waterloo, CA

    if your ever in that part of the state ~ check it out ribs 2 die for and barstools made out of tractor seats!

    Love,Peace,Joy!!!


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    dotsChicken & Ribsdots
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    Mmmm good Waterloo
    chicken & ribs
    Sauce on the fingers
    and on the bibs
    Washing it down
    with a cold beer
    One section of chicken
    half of a steer
    Finish it off
    with berry fresh pie
    The best darn bbq
    and that ain't no lie!




    Submitted on 2005-06-13 15:21:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was cute, but I am not sure it belongs under comedy. It is not funny to me. I think this is a good write anyways. :P
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2005-07-27 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]
      mmm,
    it's simple and cute,
    it got straight to the point and wasn't too plain, it was kinda like a jingle, u should try singing it to a song, i'm sure it would sound good, anywayz i liked it.

    ~latykim~
    | Posted on 2005-07-06 00:00:00 | by latykim | [ Reply to This ]
      That was nifty...I'm hungry now!! good write and quite entertainnig...keep up the good work, and the humor, we need mroe of that on this site...

    Desser
    | Posted on 2005-06-13 00:00:00 | by Desser | [ Reply to This ]
      very cute. now i want some ribs. i am kind of hungry now that i read this. i guess i better go eat some lunch. great job lia
    | Posted on 2005-06-13 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]
      heh If I am ever in the area I will be sure
    to stop by.
    This remindes me of a place call
    Mckennas
    but damn BBQ around these her parts.
    ~shawn
    | Posted on 2005-06-13 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      mmmmmmmmm bbq :) Now I'm hungry <DOH!> OH well, what can yah do? Nice little diddy and I'll have to try that bbq place if I'm ever in Waterloo, Ca :)

    Stw
    | Posted on 2005-06-14 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]
      Mmm..Meat I love it. This poem makes me hungry. I think I'm going to cook some ribs pretty soon. or some hot links! yeah wiuth grilled onions
    | Posted on 2005-06-16 00:00:00 | by Ratmeat | [ Reply to This ]
      I like BBQ too. I love it! Of course I do, I'm black! Anyway, nice humorous, fun poem. They all shouldn't be serious especially if they come from within. I enjoyed reading this.

    X
    | Posted on 2005-06-17 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]


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