whoa, girly! props to you for writing this piece! this was so modestly obscene (ironic, i know). i like how you capitalized the basic, blunt descriptions that tell exactly what you like. i have a feeling that you will probably get a few negative comments about it being "taboo" or "obscene" or "disgusting", and i'm sure some males will not enjoy this piece, but i sure as h*ll did! rock on, girl! what a write! ^_^
hugs and c0cks the way you like 'em, ~*dark_and_dreary*~
I've gotta give credit where credit's due. I admire your forwardness, and your bluntness. And I think deep down, there's many of us out there that wouldn't mind one like that *ahems and whistles innocently*
I love it! And even if you get negative comments, it's only because some people can't handle 'in your face' poetry about sex. You took it to a level where you wanted it, and I commend you girl!
I like this, especially coming from a female, you don't see that very often. I like your openness to sexuality and you express it pretty clear and to the point. I "dig" the poem a lot, you did a good job, don't see anything wrong with it. I like people who take their poetry to different levels and you did that. Good job
You won't get negative thoughts from me, I'm too busy thinking about the different items your clever little ditty could be describing... Surely you're not telling me that it's a blatant sexy erotic thing? Lawdy! Tell it like it is, my dear, and more power to you! (I lean towards a cup of hot chocolate)
Wooooooo....*high fives and giggles all round* ...I started drooling on the first line ..Congrats to you for going somewhere few do ...I love erotic poetry ...It's pretty ...and *drool* I have no bad comments on this ...Aside from the subject matter ...the style and flow was awesome ..wording was fantastic ...all round good peice ...xoxox
This is a very good job! I hope no one will come and censor you... I greatly enjoy your work, you go straight to the point without being trashy and too explicit. I liked this one a lot. Keep'em coming girl!
This is so funny You speaking like me! this was different than I thought it would be but I liked it It was pretty blunt but hey that's what I do so why hate right That was a good write good job Peace Mysterious