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    dots Submission Name: Flying Circledots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Sitting by the lake sipping wine, watching the colorful birds and looking at my mystical ring...


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    dotsFlying Circledots

    The bird like the ring
    Gold & Blue
    The color of song
    a brilliant hue
    Purple mountain future
    the bird spreads its wings
    The ring like an angel
    harmonic song "IT" sings
    A glimpse into the future
    the beauty of the now
    Like a spiritual marriage
    the souls eternal vow

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      this was awsome as well. you really have a way with words. or maybe its the winelol. well grat write. i do have one question though i notested in your other poem you had it cppitalized and in quotes is there a reason? well great write anyways lia
    | Posted on 2005-06-14 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]
      just beautiful Tiff. you always write such peaceful things, at least the ones i've read! a reminder to live in the now, in the moment and savor everything there. then there is that eye on the future but never at the expense of now.
    thanks for the reminder!
    | Posted on 2005-06-14 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Quite spiritual indeed :)...I like the imagery you used in this and color of a song :) quite interesting :)...this was obviously a wine filled weekend for you :P :P :P :)

    Keep up the good writes!


    | Posted on 2005-06-14 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]

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