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    dots Submission Name: Oppression or Enthusiasmdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsOppression or Enthusiasmdots
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    Cast the stone
    upon the lake
    The future ripples
    and is the wake
    Is "IT" what one's given
    or what one will take?
    Life mere destiny
    or what we make?




    Submitted on 2005-06-14 10:58:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow this is great. perfict word choice and it said everything in just a few words. grat job on this piece i loved it awsome lia
    | Posted on 2005-06-14 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmmmmmm...a bit perplexing, but I like the message/question that you pose. THe age old philosophical question of do we control our own destiny or is everything set in stone :) Nice take on it though :)

    Have fun, drink Pepsi :P

    STw
    | Posted on 2005-06-14 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]
      interesting way of putting this, i liked it. short, sweet, and simple. good job. i like the ripple and stone affect good word choic.
    | Posted on 2005-06-16 00:00:00 | by fiery_eyes | [ Reply to This ]
      I would love to see a book of rhymes with minimalist thoughts like these. Poetry was here before the written word so rhyme and rhythm were devices to help us remember. What better way to recall a quote of profound advice
    than in the midst of rhyme?

    As for content, life can give us pain but we choose to do differently..using motivation and goals, and so much love to share.
    This is a profound key you've written to compell the thoughts of your readers. Great job! Thanks for sharing.
    Nan
    | Posted on 2005-06-17 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]


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