Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Oppression or Enthusiasmdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 667
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 210



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsOppression or Enthusiasmdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Cast the stone
    upon the lake
    The future ripples
    and is the wake
    Is "IT" what one's given
    or what one will take?
    Life mere destiny
    or what we make?




    Submitted on 2005-06-14 10:58:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      wow this is great. perfict word choice and it said everything in just a few words. grat job on this piece i loved it awsome lia
    | Posted on 2005-06-14 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmmmmmm...a bit perplexing, but I like the message/question that you pose. THe age old philosophical question of do we control our own destiny or is everything set in stone :) Nice take on it though :)

    Have fun, drink Pepsi :P

    STw
    | Posted on 2005-06-14 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]
      interesting way of putting this, i liked it. short, sweet, and simple. good job. i like the ripple and stone affect good word choic.
    | Posted on 2005-06-16 00:00:00 | by fiery_eyes | [ Reply to This ]
      I would love to see a book of rhymes with minimalist thoughts like these. Poetry was here before the written word so rhyme and rhythm were devices to help us remember. What better way to recall a quote of profound advice
    than in the midst of rhyme?

    As for content, life can give us pain but we choose to do differently..using motivation and goals, and so much love to share.
    This is a profound key you've written to compell the thoughts of your readers. Great job! Thanks for sharing.
    Nan
    | Posted on 2005-06-17 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    62751

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Deep Into A World Of Despair written by DeathTone
    I, Plutarch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    I AM THANKFUL FOR written by Ramneet
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (2) written by endlessgame23
    Comme un lion en avril written by Outlaw
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Still Perfectly Flawed written by armand
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    Shut Up written by annie0888
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (3) written by endlessgame23
    phantom limbs written by expiring_touch
    Carry written by saartha
    Vortex: The Imagination That Is written by KeeperOfLight
    i've missed written by mysalvation
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    My Four Seasons written by faideddarkness
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Tartarus written by endlessgame23
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    Redemption written by poetotoe
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    to Be like written by KeeperOfLight
    untitled written by ShyOne
    Relativity written by poetotoe
    Lilitu written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (4) written by endlessgame23
    Birds of a Feather written by poetotoe

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry