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    dots Submission Name: I Found a Forgotten Dreamdots
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    Author: Leila
    ASL Info:    19/female/South Africa
    Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 98/85/18
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 330
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    Description:
       I know that this poem is one of those clichéd soppy type poems you'd get as a message on your cellphone, but nevertheless, it is based on an experience. Thanks for reading it.


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    dotsI Found a Forgotten Dreamdots
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    In a moment of sunshine
    and in an instance of faith,
    oh, I found a forgotten dream,
    that was lost in a darker place.

    For once, upon sombre times,
    when all hope no longer thrived,
    I let go of a part of me,
    not all of my dreams survived.

    Then one summer afternoon,
    a seraph came bearing light,
    from where hopes, dreams and love may grow
    with a spirit that burnt bright.

    His silence spoke all his words,
    of a sky without an end
    with no doubt and a tinge of hope
    in glance, my dream was mend'.

    Now, I keep my dreams in reach,
    in my fears we will soon part.
    But if again my dreams may fade,
    then I shall catch it with my heart.




    Submitted on 2005-06-14 16:12:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Lol for you are the dream catcher. Way to go
    I could use you as my editor. Every line flowed and was perfectly in its present space.
    I agree sometimes a dream just turns out to be a memory. Really that is mere perspective for we know what are dreams are. Its a matter of a firm charge in some cases. Yet in others we just allow them to unfold. As one that has had many dreams I have seen them come and go with results of some kind or another. Yet some is woth that up hill climb maybe in low gear. No matter even the trip is an adventure in it's self. Much to be appreciated with this pome your wrote. So far its been a true delight but now its time to go so.

    Sincerly Gannondalf aka Big Bear
    ps thanks for comming over and checking out a pome or two i have another up called Detention looking foward to seeing you it's hard to comment on kinda leaves one stunned none the less so far I think its my best but I am open to criticise or pointers C'ya around I am bedwardly bound
    | Posted on 2006-05-03 00:00:00 | by Gannondalf | [ Reply to This ]
      This is beautiful
    I find nothing wrong with this at all
    This is not sappy this is true emotion from the heart
    I really love how you pointed out when dreams seem lost the Heart brings them back to cherish
    That line is perfect
    God Bless
    Your Friend
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-03-30 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      What a lovely poem. Uplifting and easy to read. It's really wonderful to be able to find a forgotten dream..and perhaps make it come true. We sometimes let our dreams fade.. and a part of us along with them also fades.
    The last two lines were so beautiful. Nice job here.
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-06-18 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]



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