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    dots Submission Name: I Love You, I Love You Notdots
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    Author: Geraldine
    ASL Info:    25
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 241/296/80
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 471
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 523



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    dotsI Love You, I Love You Notdots
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    I love you,
    I love you not,
    a battle between my heart and mind,
    a war I've already fought.

    I love you,
    I love you not,
    my tears fall, my blood spills,
    my wounds begin to rot.

    I love you,
    I love you not,
    your kiss has stained my lips,
    your face has clouded my thoughts.

    I love you,
    I love you not,
    though you're the reason for this chaos,
    you're also the salvation I have sought.




    Submitted on 2005-06-15 16:19:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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