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    dots Submission Name: COACH DAN PASCOEdots
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    Author: Raven_s Miser
    ASL Info:    16-female- wap
    Elite Ratio:    4.64 - 68/54/18
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 705
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    Bytes: 358



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       THIS IS ABOUT ONE OF OUR SENIORS AT OUR HIGHT SCHOOL HE IS A GREAT ARTIST MUSICALLY SO WE HAD A FACULTY BASKETBALL GAME AND THEN HE GAVE THIS SPEECH .

    SO SINCE THEN I FIGURED THAT A LITTLE SCHOOL MEMORY GOSE A LONG WAY SO THIS IS FOR HIM

    THANKS DAN PASCOE
    YOU ARE A GREAT SINGE AND COMEDIAN


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    dots COACH DAN PASCOEdots
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    " LIFE GIVES YOU OPPERTUNITIES LIKE SPICED HAM, BOLOGNA, AND ROAST BEEF.

    YOU ADD THE BUNS AND YOU MAKE A HOGIE.

    YOU ADD THE MAYONNAISE AND YOU GET AN AMERICAN HOGIE.

    I CAN ONLY GIVE YOU THE BUNS. YOU HAVE TO BE THE MAYONNAISE.

    NOW GET OUT THERE AND MAKE ONE HECK OF A HOGIE!!!!!!"




    Submitted on 2005-06-16 11:35:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love this thing! If I was on Dan's team I'd soooo be da lettuce.HAHA.This is a great speach spoken by Dan Pascoe of the 'TITans' hockey team!
    | Posted on 2005-06-16 00:00:00 | by ArtichokeMosher | [ Reply to This ]


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