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    dots Submission Name: A New Daydots
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    Author: Nicki
    ASL Info:    18/F/New York
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 19/42/23
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 222
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 758



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       Basically, I just toke a breath of fresh air after being surpressed by dispair and heartache


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    dotsA New Daydots
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    A new day has arrived
    Absolute proof that I have survived
    Through all the trials and tribulations
    Discarding all complications
    Raising my expectations

    A new day has arrived
    Absolute proof that I have survived
    No more crying to sleep at night
    Wondering if I'm gonna be alright
    Without your affections
    Which were in truth a misconceptions

    A new day has arrived
    Absolute proof that I am alive
    Relishing in each new emotion
    Causing major commotions

    A new day has arrived
    Absolute proof that I am alive
    A new day to realize I don't need you
    A new day to bid you adieu
    And start brand new




    Submitted on 2005-06-16 12:27:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well I like the sentiments you express here, and I'm glad to hear that your "new day" HAS arrived.
    At some point we have to take that deep bewath, sp well done.
    Poetically, there's a few things that could be fixed up, but I'm just glad to hear you're on the way up.

    Be Happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-06-16 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]



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