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    dots Submission Name: Your Line Is Always Busydots
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    Author: steph1011
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 34/45/25
    Words: 267
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 275
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1637



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    dotsYour Line Is Always Busydots
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    Your line is always busy
    (how can I get to you)
    Your always talking to your cool friends
    (how can there be an relationship)
    Your always practicing for your sport
    i. (is there room for me)
    Your too busy studying
    (is there time for me)

    Trying harder and harder
    it doesn't seem to get easy
    am I getting in your way
    just tell me I need to know
    is their words to tell me
    Just tell me please I need to know.

    Your always in those nasty moods
    (what did i do to you)
    Your always taking it out
    (what can I do to you)
    Your to much to handle baby
    (what will this end too)
    Your in love with someone else
    (what did I keep from you)


    Trying harder and harder
    it doesn't seem to get easy
    am I getting in your way
    just tell me I need to know
    is their words to tell me
    Just tell me please I need to know.


    Tell me
    what could I be
    What did I do to you
    is it something real
    that will make me understand
    tell me
    wha could I be
    Im dying here
    all alone
    tell me

    Trying harder and harder
    it doesn't seem to get easy
    am I getting in your way
    just tell me I need to know
    is their words to tell me
    Just tell me please I need to know.





    Submitted on 2005-06-16 15:25:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was pretty intresting, but it wasn't really in my taste. I did really love the flow and how it flowed into each other.
    | Posted on 2005-06-16 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought the lyrics were really great because, lots of people can relate to them. But, it seems like it would be one of those girl band pop songs... and that's not really my style (but it may be yours). Great Job!

    xoxo FeelinTheMusic
    | Posted on 2005-06-18 00:00:00 | by FeelinTheMusic | [ Reply to This ]



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