What color am I? by confusing myslf

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Submission Name: What color am I? dots

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Author:	confusing myslf
ASL Info:	14/f/WA
Elite Ratio:	2.74 - 25/35/11
Words:	98

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	211
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	657

Description:
Another poem that we did in class. It's nothing unique or special, I know that... but I still kinda like it and it was pretty fun/ easy to write.

What color am I? dots

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When my color is light blue...
I am calm and quiet
thoughtful and deep
saying little, though listening much
hoping to hide in the shadows
caught up in my own little world

When my color is black...
I am hyper and loud
sarcastic and confident
saying everything that pops into my head
ready to jump into the spotlight
hoping to make you laugh

Yet, when my color is rainbow...
I am quiet and loud
wise and immature
saying nothing and everything at the same time
ready to change my mood without warning
confused and indecisive

Submitted on 2005-06-16 18:04:34 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
  As stated before, i like the last 6 lines. it shows that you are human. It brings up the memories of HS to me. I didn't fit in with any one "click" but hung out with everyone. This is a very great poem, not to much i would sugest to change. overall great job :-D Keep writing, it's one of the most origonal i have seen so far :-D
| Posted on 2005-07-03 00:00:00 | by OrangeWithWhite | [ Reply to This ]
  this is good it reminds me of a mood ring with all the colors it diffrent and unique of couse(forgive my spelling)but i like it
| Posted on 2005-06-26 00:00:00 | by endmypain | [ Reply to This ]
  this is good, i like the last six lines
"Yet, when my color is rainbow...
I am quiet and loud
wise and immature
saying nothing and everything at the same time
ready to change my mood without warning
confused and indecisive", i like how the contradictions. Good writing
| Posted on 2005-06-16 00:00:00 | by fiery_eyes | [ Reply to This ]

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