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    dots Submission Name: surprise of a lifetimedots
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    Author: intoxicated411
    ASL Info:    14/f/earth
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 45/60/28
    Words: 327
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 251
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       i just thought of this...it has nothing to do with me...hope you like it!!!


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    dotssurprise of a lifetimedots
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    I was sitting there wondering why we were at the beach at night on the coldest day of the year...but soon after your gentle,steady breath caressed the side of my neck a feeling of calmness overpowered the wondering. I felt your hand creep into my coat pocket and leave something there but i didnt bother to search for it. We were dancing to no music on the beach. You pressed against me and delivered a kiss on my neck then whispered in my ear "run away with me". As soon as those words exscaped your mouth , i knew you were just trying to be romantic. It was cold so you wrapped me in your arms as we looked into each others eyes and then we kissed...like we never kissed before. You tasted like mint mocha frappuchino. Your hands now gently craddled my face and you kissed me with so much passion. That night you dropped me off at my house at 11:00. I went to my room and remembered the surprise you left in my pocket. It was an envelope with a letter saying
    I love you as much as my heart and soul will let me and i know you do to...look out your window.
    all my love,
    Danny

    I looked out my window and hanging from a branch was a string with a little box hanging from it. I opened it and there was a diamond ring inside with a tiny piece of paper saying, "will you marry me?"
    I knew from that moment you were the only one who would make me feel warm on a cold night.




    Submitted on 2005-06-17 01:35:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      awwww that is so sweet i am a true romantic and that so cute.i agree with joey you did pain a good picture of a couple in love .
    | Posted on 2005-07-25 00:00:00 | by endmypain | [ Reply to This ]
      Awwww. What a sweet story. I like the picture you painted here, though I'd like to see more. Nice write here.

    Peace,

    Joey
    | Posted on 2005-06-17 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey! It's your bf. This is a new one...I like it! it's sweet. You could have elaborated alot more but you basically summarized it which is always great.BTW Thx for the comment. Lov, Dickie
    | Posted on 2005-06-18 00:00:00 | by 15yearsemotion | [ Reply to This ]



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