Description: The reason why I wrote this is because most people think that when you get married or you are with someone it is just the two of you .But sometimes your partner can bring some unexpecteg luggage.
Marriage of 3 -------------------------------------------
I was so stupidly blind to see
That Iwould be in marriage of 3
I really do love being his wife
And can't see him out of my life
Everything was good on the wedding day
There was no problems or any dismay
The honeymoon was like a dream
Forever me and him would be a team
At first he'd spend every day with me
But now he's always so busy
He used to come in at night around 8
But now he comes fashionably late
He always has lipstick on his face
And loves to go over to her place
She even washes and dries his clothes
When I try to wash them he says no
He gives her gifts and gives her money
She says "Oh your so sweet honey"
Sometimes she even comes over here
And tries to be sweet and call me dear
This woman is driving me insane
She is really wrecking my brain
He tells me to listen to her advice
Because she is trying to be nice
Oh there she is knocking at the door
I don't know if I can take it anymore
I open the door and she says "where's he at"
Right now I want to hit her face with a bat
He comes running down the stairs
And goes and pulls her out a chair
He says" How have you been mother"
"Guess what I have just discovered"
And there they go on just chatting away
She can always find a way to ruin my day
I hate that Iwas too blind to see
That this would be a marraige of 3
some guys are a mothers boy but that is an awsome twist at the end i usually look for a dramatic ending and i was even surprised but thats good this does seem to capture the essence of a mothers boy what inspired you? is your b/f a mothers boy? well either way take care girl and keep up the good work kristen
a lil mums blouse (in the nicest possible way...) its not hard to have a marriage of three these days though... boy and girl and sport, fashion, work, ex's, parents, pasts and the list goes on and on and on and on...
personally im not reals good with rhyme pieces (but i recognize that is fully me) but sometimes rhyme seems to minimalise the point the writer is trying to get across...
the twist at the end... that the she in his life was the mother was well done and not completely expected though i had a sneaking suspicion with the washing clothes part... no one seems to be able to wash clothes as well as mothers somehow...
im not sure though that it is intentional of the mother to ruin your day though... perhaps just because you feel so on the outer and resent the large part of the marrage she seems to occupy that that is why it seems shes out to ruin your day but really shes just a mother who loves her son and cant let go... and doesnt know her place...
You know in most cases it is the guy that can't grow up and let go of mama. But in my case with my first wife it was she that couldn't let go of moma and so I can really relate to what you are saying here. I think you have a good write, !Doc`