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    dots Submission Name: My Reason.dots
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    Author: detatched
    ASL Info:    26/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 7/9/7
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 262
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    dotsMy Reason.dots
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    Basking in annonymity,
    Approaching descent.
    Collapse becomes innevitable,
    And destruction, complete.
    Bliss in conciousness,
    The key to perception.
    Faithful to obscure myths
    And dying for control.
    Thrown into confession,
    The empty judgement.
    Ridiculed by circumstance,
    Damned for what I've done.
    Complete in passing,
    The emptiness gone.
    Ending so suddenly,
    This blink of an eye.
    Substance infinite,
    Branching off through time.
    Enveloped in lucidity,
    It's fragile essence, complete.




    Submitted on 2005-06-17 08:30:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      From what I got out of the poem it seemed as if it was a person going through life, but then again I'm very stupid. "Basking in annonymity" - seems like your style from what I've read of your other poems, a signature is a good thing :).

    "Faithful to obscure myths
    And dying for control."

    Raises alot of ideas, which is a great thing. The only thing I didn't like about this poem was the title. It seemed more like a person going through life and then showing how insignifigant we really are. Unless this is a metaphor for a personal experience I don't think anyone will understand "My Reason." From what I got out of it I give it a 5/5.
    | Posted on 2005-06-17 00:00:00 | by MrBear | [ Reply to This ]
      This was very good. I loved it says life all over it! This poem made me feel as though life is incomplete! This was an awsome poem keep up great work!
    | Posted on 2005-06-17 00:00:00 | by takenspiritwind | [ Reply to This ]



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