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    dots Submission Name: Love's Promisedots
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    Author: JKPS613
    ASL Info:    17 / f / GA / USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.99 - 388/377/47
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 302
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    Description:
       I wrote this really quickly yesterday...it sort of reminds me of, you know, "Now I lay me down to sleep."


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    dotsLove's Promisedots
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    Dream of your troubles
    That I may kiss them away.
    Let me hold you
    Until they fade,
    And if your love
    Turns to hate,
    I promise not to leave,
    I swear I'm here to stay.




    Submitted on 2005-06-17 11:08:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Short but impressive. Very nice and sweet. Is it for your boy toy David? Just Kidding. Nice Work. Love poems are always great t read whether or not your in the mood. Bye Ash.
    | Posted on 2005-06-17 00:00:00 | by SincerWritinAsh | [ Reply to This ]
      nice job...I like it alot :) it's really sweet, I love teh way it's short but kinda packs a punch...or no not a punch...lol a "Love tap" haha nice write I'd like to know who it's for though! haha love it
    | Posted on 2005-06-17 00:00:00 | by lilghostyme | [ Reply to This ]



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