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    dots Submission Name: Hungerdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       A co-worker & <@> were bored & each opened the dictionary & whichever word our finger was on we had 1 minute 2 write a poem. Here's mine using the word hunger - just under 1 minute.

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    dotsHungerdots
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    What is this feeling
    for which we hunger?

    Search for "IT" now
    as when we were younger.

    Spir"IT"ual food
    offered to ease life's pain

    Love, Peace & Joy
    freedoms which forever reign









    Submitted on 2005-06-17 12:08:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked the originality of this piece, the way certain words were put together to convey an idea. Very good. Keep it up.
    | Posted on 2005-07-03 00:00:00 | by Malcolm Bishop | [ Reply to This ]
      hunger. something i dislike truly.

    Spir"IT"ual food
    offered to ease life's pain

    found that to be clever. the spiritual part. and sure does end the pain.

    your words made me smile. but then made me think about the 'hungers' out there.

    -soomie
    | Posted on 2005-06-30 00:00:00 | by poeticblindness | [ Reply to This ]
      That's a rather interesting way to write a poem, Lol. Though short, it was good, and the fact that you had one minute to think of a way to use the word Hunger. It keeps you thinking, even if the idea seems a tad, off the wall.
    | Posted on 2005-06-17 00:00:00 | by MyHeart2Yours | [ Reply to This ]
      very simple but so easy with a very good image posted very colourful in deed
    i wrote one called hunger too a little different though will post next week
    thanx for your comments
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-06-17 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      Lol, I tried to post this comment without using the space bar. I ending up getting a message about how this site wasn't intended for silly one liners :P...This was a very creative poem for the time restraints...hunger is a good word to spawn a poem from :) Nice to have a job that allows you to do that ;)

    STw
    | Posted on 2005-06-19 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]


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