Why me? by ShatteredGlass

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Author:	ShatteredGlass
Elite Ratio:	2.75 - 21/26/9
Words:	100

Class/Type:	Poetry/Me
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ok. random. i was thinking about my friend that really likes me. really really. anyways, i wrote it for him. he wrote me back on it also. we espress our feelings through poetry, and that really helps me get inspiration to write things about.

so just say how you liked/didn't like it. thanx!

Why me?

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Why have you chosen me
out of everyone else?
I am a nobody.

Like a leaf from a tree,
dancing crazily in the wind,
then lost in a fog.

Like a drop of water in the ocean,
or a single grain of salt.
All the same, yet so complex.

Yet you call me different,
ordinary,
special,
strange.
You've picked me out of all the others,
like picking a blade of grass in a
sea of green.

There is something I don't see.
Something you have chosen out of me...

Submitted on 2005-06-17 12:18:05 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I think that this is rather cute. And the fact that you have a friend who will write back in poetry form. The art of writing poetry is a truely magical concept. You can say almost anything you want in a poem and if you keep enough interest people will always read. In a way I can relate to your poem, so often do we just question "why" when there are billions of other people out there. Keep it up!
| Posted on 2005-06-17 00:00:00 | by MyHeart2Yours | [ Reply to This ]
  good write nobody nos one hundred percent for sure the questions you ask in your post and how do you no when they are honest just a thought anyway nice write and gives a good image of new found love
sandman
| Posted on 2005-06-17 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
  You know, I like that this could be taken as good or bad. I'm one of those called different too. Oddly, my teachers and adults were always positive, but some kids called me nerd or freak. Maybe the comparisons could have been more unique, but this is a pleasant read.
| Posted on 2005-06-19 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
  very descriptive and, although the comment guide says not to say this, i can relate! most people have probably gone through something of the sort, and it's pretty confusing. i think it's great that you can write to your friend in poetry form. but anyways, i liked it. good job!
| Posted on 2005-06-17 00:00:00 | by confusing myslf | [ Reply to This ]

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