This is a cool song/poem. I went through it a couple times to make a beat for it. Fortunatly, I was able to get one. Sounds like everything is going to [censored] with the one speaking out. The only person they can count on is the sister.
I'm curious, do you have a chorus for this song? if so, what is it? This has good potential. -mike
the title doesn't fit I don't think. By reading this caption from your song, The title should revolve around the sister, as it does in the caption.