this was ok, very short, but overall it was ok...what do you mean by 'a breached mind'? i agree though, '..parasite we call man...' definitely understand this part. it seems the only way men survive is 'by feeding off of others and driving them to near extinction' or that's what my friend the activist says. shes a little...OFF upstairs if ya know what i mean...keep working...(i totally am glad that other people don't title their poems...sometimes they're just thoughts without any heading or distinction)
this was ok, very short, but overall it was ok...what do you mean by 'a breached mind'? i agree though, '..parasite we call man...' definitely understand this part. it seems the only way men survive is 'by feeding off of others and driving them to near extinction' or that's what my friend the activist says. shes a little...OFF upstairs if ya know what i mean...keep working...(i totally am glad that other people don't title their poems...sometimes they're just thoughts without any heading or distinction)
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