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    dots Submission Name: In A Dark Cornerdots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Dedicated to Everyone Who's Going Through Hard Times... Times Can Only Get Better Right?


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    dotsIn A Dark Cornerdots
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    Everyone needs a dark corner,
    To cry in when they feel alone
    No need for a shoulder,
    When you know everyone's gone.

    Everyone needs a dark corner,
    That doesn't share the same sorrow
    When the pressure of biegn older,
    Stays deep inside of us beyond a tomorrow.

    How many of us need some time alone to think,
    In a hollow dark place
    Where tears make one blink,
    Yet for every blink our pain is erased.

    Who needs a friend,
    When they vanish in one moment
    Not knowing that our torment,
    Lies beyond...
    Beyond a dark corner.





    Submitted on 2005-06-18 00:40:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked this. It had a good flow, and you worded things properly. It was a very good write. Keep it up. Hope to see more in the future.

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    | Posted on 2005-06-18 00:00:00 | by Thinkingofyou | [ Reply to This ]
      this was written very mature with talent. i like the way you expressed this poem with such truth and emotion. keep up the good work !
    | Posted on 2005-06-18 00:00:00 | by J-IDENTITY | [ Reply to This ]


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