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    dots Submission Name: "The Seed that Grew"dots
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    Author: Cindergarden1
    ASL Info:    18 Male Sweden
    Elite Ratio:    4.69 - 43/58/17
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dots"The Seed that Grew"dots
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    Somewhere in the depths of you
    Lingers still the seed that grew
    The doubts you had, the hope you lost
    The price you paid to avoid the cost
    of lowering your garde

    Yes, somewhere in the back of head
    By memories stashed, by dreams now dead
    Filed into a cabinet
    Is the child you never met
    The choice you made was hard

    This child desires not to know
    Why you not reap just what you sow
    But I would ask you if we met
    Do you ever feel regret?




    Submitted on 2005-06-18 17:44:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a very well written take on abortion. I reall ylike it. Parts of it seemed a bit choppy oand forced but nonetheless it still has awesome power. I love the questioning feel of the poem, then topped off with an actual question. This is really nice and I have the same take on the subject as you do. I think that abortion is the cruelest thing you can do. You are robbing a child of potential life. It is nothing more than murder. It is sad to think so many have gotten abortions just because they did not want the responsibility. They never give that child a chance at life because they think he/she will make theirs a bit more diffucult. Once again I really like this peice. Thanks for the read, PEACE.
    | Posted on 2005-06-18 00:00:00 | by ConScribe | [ Reply to This ]


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