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    dots Submission Name: LET ME BE YOUR "OO...AHH...."dots
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    Author: J-IDENTITY
    Elite Ratio:    2.69 - 76/108/28
    Words: 203
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Passion
    Total Views: 447
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1225



    Description:
       I CREATED THIS PIECE FOR THE PLEASURE OF PASSION. SO FEEL MY IDENTITY-N- I'LL FEEL YO'S

    " BLIND IS A BEAUTIFUL THANG "


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    dots LET ME BE YOUR "OO...AHH...."dots
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    I want to scent your dreamy temptation, then I'll be all over your body like a lustful vibration.
    let me be your oooo,ahhh !

    Our tongues will be thrashing while our hips are in the movement of sensual smashing.
    let me be your ooo,ahhh !

    I'll make your sweet cherry pop, leaving your body so sprug until you feel weak to drop.
    let me be your ooo,ahhh !

    I'll be licking the honey of your honeycomb, while you begin to scream and moan.
    let me be your ooo,ahhh !

    You'll be all over me like a slip-n-slide, while I'll explore your body taking my scrumptions slow time. let me be your ooo,ahhh !

    Let me soak deeply inside your body, then I'll play mr.foreplay naughty-naughty.
    let me be your ooo,ahhh !

    I'll provide you with erotic feirceful pleasure,but not too rough. then I'll make you talk dirty while you say " I had enough " .
    let me be your ooo,ahhh !

    Now It's time for you to make up your mind.
    don't take so long, cause I'll have another girl at home, moaning to me saying " ooo,ahh " !!!




    Submitted on 2005-06-18 18:16:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Dammit! You got that damn Mattress Giant song in my head now! LOL

    This was nice. You had lyrical flashes here and there that would make a woman drop her panties on the spot. To me the repition of Let ME BE...takes away from the seduction. But hey, it's still a very good piece. OOOOO...AHHHHHHHHHH

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    | Posted on 2005-08-01 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh yeah!
    Fav list right away! This is HILARIOUS.

    IT'S LIKE oooOOOOOOOOOOOO
    aAAhhhhhhhhhhhh.

    dON'T TAKE tHAT THE WRONg WAY! hA HA1

    YOU HAD ME LAUGHING THROUGH OUT THE WHOLE THING. hELL YEAH.

    tIME TO GO GET LAID!
    | Posted on 2005-06-20 00:00:00 | by Brack-Attax | [ Reply to This ]
      I loooooooooooooooooooooooooove your poem. i was readin it like a poem; this would be a hot song. i gotta "sex poem" too- its called foreplay check it out. but i love your poem- im makin it my fave. keep on doin ya thang, cuz u doin it well
    love ,
    jade
    | Posted on 2005-06-20 00:00:00 | by JADE | [ Reply to This ]



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