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    dots Submission Name: lost: civilizations and lovedots
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    Author: amun
    Elite Ratio:    6.53 - 31/14/9
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotslost: civilizations and lovedots
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    lost civilizations and matters of love lost
    each ending word, a wall, a gap
    the Egytians worshipped cats
    I am much the same
    a scarab wearily rolling
    my ball of dung home.
    through Horus eye
    I see the fear she finds
    being near to me
    how denial and escape brew
    timid tears among the lace
    once woven between us.

    This day, I paint in words
    a portrait of my grief and longing
    she knew the depth of my pain
    in the hours I held at bay
    she managed to send
    a few cryptic messages
    full of holes as aging lace
    diminishes in strength over time.

    this day's tears have washed away
    the veil of wishes she might be
    I see what is..

    she knew
    and left me to cry alone
    the ache of longing
    I've comforted her for
    over and over.

    she ran, like a rabbit
    like some scared
    little imposter.






    Submitted on 2005-06-19 00:53:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This seems more like venting, or even a run on sentence. It goes in and out of being poetic. I did however enjoy the emotion and wording of many parts.
    | Posted on 2005-06-19 00:00:00 | by kriley6497 | [ Reply to This ]


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